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Post by mockingjay on Mar 20, 2017 3:54:46 GMT 8
Name: Mockingjay
Gender: Female
Age: 18 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Current Allegiance: IvyClan
Personality: Sometimes stubborn but will listen to reason, somewhat reserved but open to those she knows, determined and strictly lives by the warrior code
Appearance: Pitch black she-cat. Looks red in the sun. Fur resembles that of a feather (short fur). No patterns on fur. Bright green eyes. Generally small. Not skinny but not muscular.
History: Sister died in a fire, parents are unknown.
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Post by Umbra on Mar 24, 2017 15:32:59 GMT 8
Hi, mockingjay! Sorry it took me a bit to get to you. Your character looks great, but she needs some fleshing out with her character, maybe explain how she is reserved or why she lives strictly by the warrior code, or how one part of her personality affects the other parts. |
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